Blog 4

To: T. Leoni, Manager, Personnel Department
From: Donald Pryzblo, Manager, Data Processing Department
Subject: Incorrect Payroll Errors

I have been reviewing the errors in the computer files.

Base on my findings, it was hard to find out who is the blame for the payroll errors. I know that both departments are working very hard to make sure that all payroll checks are correctly inputted into the system.

You and I discussed requiring my computer operators to perform the task of comparing their entries against the time sheets from which your clerks are miscopying. I think that is a good idea and I will have my people working on it.

I would like for us to come up with a plan so that there would be a check and balance between both departments.

With both departments working together, the payroll errors shouldn't be a problem in the foreseeable future.

I revise this email by changing several thing. First; I took most of the subject heading out of caps. The reason being because the subject heading tell the reader what the problem is without it being cap. Second; I made sure that no department was blame for the payroll errors. By during that no-one feel like they were at false. Finally; I purpose that both departments work together to solve future problem.

Blog 3

Looking through several different Criminal Justice Programs websites from across the south, I found three universities that was interesting to me and they are: The University Of Southern Mississippi, Delta State University, and Mississippi State University. These three websites are similar to a point were they offer degrees in Law Enforcement and Corrections but the difference is that the University of Southern Mississippi also offers a degree in Forensic Science. All of the other websites from other Universities were offering close to the same curriculum as these three list above. As a student, you should look to see which school offers the best chance for a better career in the Criminal Justice Program. My readers have a small but informative pamphlet to give them a quick insight about the Criminal Justice department.

After analyzing these different web pages and considering what would be the best for me, I begin to consider how a brochure would look like in my major. By using the worksheet from the lesson plan, I came up with a creative idea on how the brochure would be. The front of the brochure would define excitement about the Criminal Justice Department from Policeman, to squad cars and police dogs. My call to write is to attract incoming students to the University Of Southern Mississippi Criminal Justice Degree.

With everything that goes into making a brochure it seems hard trying to get everything into a compact space. But beside the Internet, a brochure is one of the most popular ways of recurring students to your major. It is a important tool to have in expressing not only the University goals but, also the department mission it self.